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Interesting, but falls short

Okay, here we go. The intro was well put together and it gave me a sense of excitement. Like going up a rollercoaster, it built suspense on that fit well with the beginning of the song. BUT, everything else was, how you say, mediocre. A lot of your lines weren't smooth at all, I'm assuming you used a mouse. If you didn't, then I might suggest you practice more on your drawing skills (I know you were trying to copy Lazymuffin's style, but it would never hurt to learn). The background in this were, well, nonexistent. Yes, sometimes there were lines, but that shouldn't really count cause it takes little to no effort to put a line in there for the sake of a background. I mean, spending maybe ten to twenty minutes of your time to make somewhat a decent background would help improve this flash.

Now for the animation. Well, there was little to none animation at all! I mean, simple arm movements and mouth movements won't cut it if you want to make it good. Even those movements almost seemed robotic, might I suggest "motion cushioning" ? Facial expressions were little to none, maybe if you exaggerate the movements of their heads and jaws, it could be a little better.

As a last statement, I say it was okay, but nothing amazing. If you are interested into learning more in animation and improving at it, try looking up tutorials online and do some simple practices every other day or so. There's one thing you should know though, DONT BE LAZY. If you have an idea in your head that could make your animation slightly better, then DO IT. Don't just settle with what you got. I gotta say, animation is tough work, but boy does it pay out in the end!

I hope this review was of any use to you, and I hope you improve your skills in the near future. ;]

I'm getting smarter!

Though I am slightly offended by the cheeseburger deal, I only eat 10 a day! Not one every minute! Gosh! (Haha, but in all seriousness, great voice acting! :] )

This was me at first

Haha, when I first got my wacom and flash program, I was stumped on what to do, thank God that's not the case now. Awesome flash, fbf was great. Your going be a great fbf animator in the near future, I can feel it! :D

Very catchy song!

Gosh, that song was terrific! Haha well anyway, your art is really good, the only thing that threw me off was the animation. From what I assume, you used bone animation, which necessarily isn't bad! It's just that bone animation is good in moderation. Most, if not all of it was in that style which made the characters more like puppets than anything. And then there's their facial expressions, they didn't seem to change much, at all. They had the same expression on their face the whole time which mad them dull and again look like they're puppets. Those are just some things that you can improve on your next flash. Other than that, I absolutely love the art style and I cannot wait what you have in store for us in the future. :]

Hilarious

Absolutely loved it, its been a while since I laughed so hard. Haha, if there's one thing that would approach critically on this, it'd be the animation, but hey, I'd assume it would have taken ten times longer if you did that, what with your stunning visuals! I wish I could shade like you.....

Love this

Cant wait for the game to release!

Totally agree with Redminus!

The subtle things you added to it made it even better than the audio itself! Great job man!

This has got to be...

TOTALLY AWESOME!!!! Lol, now I feel shallow reviewing my own collab, oh well. Great job guys. :]

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This made me wish that I was as talented as you guys. I mean, honestly, THAT WAS AMAZING!

RicePirate responds:

SHUT UP! <3

Yes.

This was a great experience to animate with you guys, it turned out awesome! Props to Ockeroid for making the sick music!

Hello World! My name is Nick Wolfgang Luetmer! Or as the internet likes to call me, NeroGeist.

Age 30, Male

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Minnesota

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